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Praxis Core Writing
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Lesson 3: Worked example videos- Within-sentence punctuation | Worked example
- Subordination and Coordination | Worked example
- Parallel structure | Worked example
- Modifier Placement | Worked example
- Shifts in verb tense | Worked example
- Pronoun clarity | Worked example
- Pronoun agreement | Worked example
- Subject-verb agreement | Worked example
- Noun agreement | Worked example
- Frequently confused words | Worked example
- Conventional Expression | Worked example
- Logical comparison | Worked example
- Concision | Worked example
- Adjective/adverb confusion | Worked example
- Negation | Worked example
- Capitalization | Worked example
- Apostrophe use | Worked example
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Negation | Worked example
Watch David work through a negation question from the Praxis Core Writing test.
Video transcript
- Scarcely no specimens
of Wallace's giant bees, the largest known bees in the world, had been seen since the '80s, until some were spotted
for sale on eBay in 2018. I see a number of opportunities to simplify this sentence
for our analysis, even before we start knocking
out multiple choice options. So we can take out these
nonessential prepositional phrases like in the world, or since the '80s. And I'm also gonna get rid
of for sale on eBay in 2018, 'cause all of those are important
detail for the sentence, but for our purposes, trying to figure out whether or not this sentence works on a mechanical level,
they're not necessary. So now with all of these things taken out, the sentence reads, "Scarcely no specimens
of Wallace giant bees, "the largest known bees, "have been seen until some were spotted." Now that sentence isn't as
interesting as it used to be, but I think it makes
it a little bit easier. And you know what? We can take out until
some were spotted as well. So now the sentence reads, "Scarcely no specimens
of Wallace's giant bees, the largest known bees, had been seen." And I think that gives a
more focused, smaller canvas to work with. But even so, with that in mind, it would be pretty easy to just skim over this sentence and say well, this seems like a candidate for no error. Scarcely no specimens
of Wallace's giant bees, the largest known bees, had been seen. This comma is being used appropriately, to set off a comma-bounded
descriptive aside. The word largest is a
superlative adjective which is being used to describe the bees. And that's largest as opposed to larger, which would be the comparative form. And the larger known bees,
that would be incorrect. But largest, that is correct,
it is the most big bee, the biggest bee. And we use that E-S-T ending
to denote the superlative, when something is the most. So the comma's fine, largest is fine. With that out of the way, we can also just cross off
this descriptive aside, this comma-bounded descriptive aside. So now the sentence reads,
"Scarcely no specimens of Wallace's giant bees had been seen." Scarcely no is the only
thing about this sentence that gives me any pause at all. Wallace's, this is just a normal use of a possessive apostrophe,
the name of the species. Wallace's giant bees is
named for the scientist, presumably, that discovered the bees. So that's correct. So now we're between
scarcely no and no error. And scarcely no is a kind of obscure form of the double negative. More obvious versions
would be like saying, "There aren't no bees." In standard American english,
that is not grammatical. But scarcely has a function
similar to barely, or hardly. And ultimately, what those
words all mean is no. And so it's inappropriate to follow them with the word no. This is an error ID question. Our responsibility is not
to revise the sentence. But if we were to revise the
sentence so that it worked, we would change no to something like any, scarcely any specimens
of Wallace giant bees. So be cautious, because
at first blush, again, this seems like an error-free
sentence, but in fact, the answer is scarcely no. Double negatives like there
aren't no or scarcely no aren't grammatical in
standard American english. So you have to be on your guard
for these subtler examples.